Lovely style. The original image doesn't appear to be there anymore, so I don't know what you changed, but I really like. The pose is beautiful, and the lines are very clean. Nicely composed.
wow- really excellent job on all the porportions and details~ the only thing i would add would be the line/lines for the eyelids and maybe empahsize the eyelashes just a bit more~ to make it really a WOW piece, but i like the simplicity of the red on white, good job!
Colours: don't need,...
Shapes: awesome! I love the shapes, all is proporcional... and perfect! (well... not perfect, x3 but really good!)
Anything else?: nice eyelashes!!